*NEW PUBLICATION* Getting Children Up & Running As Book-makers: Lessons For EYFS-KS1 Teachers

In Getting Children Up & Running As Book-makers, Ross Young & Felicity Ferguson show that, when children are invited to make books every day, starting on their very first day of nursery or school, their academic progress as writers accelerates phenomenally. 

Based on the research around how young children learn to write, the book shares the fundamental concepts that need to be developed for children to write happily and successfully. These include:

  • Helping even the youngest of children write down what it is they want to say so others can read it.
  • How even the most inexperienced writers can use the strategies and techniques of adult writers.

The most important teacher a writer ever meets is their first one, and within this eBook Ross & Felicity share the 24 most important lessons that teacher could possibly teach.

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More top tips when talking to children about editing

In a previous blog post, we said that if the cost of delivering an error-free piece of writing is that children feel they never want to write again, then that cost is too high.

We pointed out how we’ve leant over children’s shoulders – jabbed with our finger. ‘Where are your fullstops?!’ ‘These children don’t even know how to write a sentence!’ ‘Not a single capital letter in the whole piece!’ And spend hours putting red pen all over children’s writing – while they learn nothing. 

There is a far more effective alternative. 

Rather than wielding the red pen and making everyone’s lives a misery, we suggest that you and your assistant teacher engage in pupil-conferencing (Ferguson & Young 2021). Here are some phrases you can use to help you teach about proof-reading:

  • Did you have a reason for deciding… [to put a semi-colon here?]
  • Tell me about your choice to… [use commas around this extra bit of information.]
  • I noticed that you… Explain what you’re thinking. [I’ve noticed the book you’re making hasn’t got a title – is there a reason for that?]
  • Show me where you’ve tried to make your writing ‘reader friendly’… [Bringing conventions back to their purpose – to help our readers]
  • Let me show you how I help my readers understand my writing so you can do it too… [Sometimes, children need an additional example beyond the whole-class mini-lesson]
  • Let’s look in the book you’re reading to see how the writer has done it [Let’s look at how the author used the conventions for speech punctuation]

As you will see, framing your teaching comments like this is a sympathetic way of drawing children’s attention to errors or omissions, clearing up possible misunderstandings, and getting them to re-think and talk about the function of conventions.

If you are interested in reading about how to develop a whole-school approach to developing proof-readers, buy our latest eBook:

In No More: My Pupils Can’t Edit, Felicity Ferguson & Ross Young invite schools and teachers to make proof-reading a rigorous and meaningful part of their class writing projects. Despite the fact that expectations for transcriptional accuracy have never been higher, schools and teachers often find it difficult to teach children to proof-read with precision and enthusiasm. This book looks to change that.

This practical guide offers an overview of The Writing For Pleasure Centre’s approach, and provides a progression for proof-reading from the EYFS-KS2. It also contains over 50 exemplar lessons taken from their affiliate schools. These lessons cover the EYFS Framework and National Curriculum objectives efficiently and effectively.

What’s special about this book is the way in which each lesson teaches children the whys of proof-reading procedures and illustrates how, as editors, they can use them for themselves. Children learn to make their writing ‘reader-friendly’ and ‘reader-ready’ prior to publication for real audiences.

Top tips when talking to children about editing

If the cost of delivering an error-free piece of writing is that children feel they never want to write again, then that cost is too high.

Leaning over children’s shoulders – jabbing with your finger and demanding ‘Where are your fullstops?’  Hours spent putting red pen all over children’s writing.  Despairing cries of ‘These children don’t even know how to write a sentence!’ or ‘Not a single capital letter in the whole piece!’

It doesn’t have to be like this.

Rather than wielding the red pen and making everyone’s lives a misery, we suggest that, at the beginning of proof-reading sessions, you and your assistant teacher engage in pupil-conferencing (Ferguson & Young 2021). Always begin a conference with a child by celebrating the conventions children are using. Here are some phrases you can use:

  • Whoa, I can certainly see that you’re a writer who knows to…
  • Wow, look at all those…
  • I really love how you’ve used … that’s really going to help your reader out.
  • This is a very reader-friendly piece of writing you’ve put together here because you’ve…
  • These are fantastic. You’re really thinking about your reader.
  • Would you look at that? This is great! Why did you use…. ?
  • I can tell you’re a great proof-reader, look at how you’ve…

If you are interested in reading about how to develop a whole-school approach to developing proof-readers, buy our latest eBook:

In No More: My Pupils Can’t Edit, Felicity Ferguson & Ross Young invite schools and teachers to make proof-reading a rigorous and meaningful part of their class writing projects. Despite the fact that expectations for transcriptional accuracy have never been higher, schools and teachers often find it difficult to teach children to proof-read with precision and enthusiasm. This book looks to change that.

This practical guide offers an overview of The Writing For Pleasure Centre’s approach, and provides a progression for proof-reading from the EYFS-KS2. It also contains over 50 exemplar lessons taken from their affiliate schools. These lessons cover the EYFS Framework and National Curriculum objectives efficiently and effectively.

What’s special about this book is the way in which each lesson teaches children the whys of proof-reading procedures and illustrates how, as editors, they can use them for themselves. Children learn to make their writing ‘reader-friendly’ and ‘reader-ready’ prior to publication for real audiences.

Eight tips for developing great proof-readers

Expectations for children to produce transcriptionally accurate pieces of writing have never been higher (DfE 2022). Yet, school-leaders and teachers tell us this is something they regularly struggle with.

Teachers can certainly lack confidence in how to explicitly teach proof-reading. For far too long, too many of us have simply announced towards the end of a writing session: ‘don’t forget to check for capital letters and fullstops!’. This kind of approach isn’t doing anyone any favours.

Eight tips for developing great proof-readers

One real problem teachers face when trying to develop great proof-readers is the lack of thought and support around how children develop as proof-readers throughout their time at school.

Perhaps an even bigger issue is that pupils need to believe that they’ve crafted something worth proof-reading in the first place. Children report that they will proof-read with motivation and precision when they know they are preparing their writing for an audience beyond just their teacher’s evaluation (Young & Ferguson 2020). 

We can help our pupils by finally taking editing seriously – explicitly teaching them the kind of proof-reading techniques and procedures other authors and editors use. A quick example is when a writer will circle their ‘unsure’ spellings as they draft – ready to look up at a later date.

Here are eight top tips schools can use as a starting point for supporting teachers and improving children’s writing:

  1. Ensure children are writing things they believe are worth proof-reading.
  2. Ensure children are proof-reading their compositions in preparation for genuine publication or performance and for audiences beyond their teacher’s evaluation.
  3. Deliver regular and explicit instruction in conventions and model how to proof-read for those conventions.
  4. Pupil-conference with children during proof-reading sessions. 
  5. Give equal focus to what children can do as well as what they can’t do – yet.
  6. Involve children in determining what gets added to a class’ editing checklist.
  7. Have a clear vision of how they expect children’s proof-reading to develop year on year. 
  8. Have appropriate expectations of what individual pupils can do based on their writing experience and any special educational needs they might have.

If you are interested in reading about how to develop a whole-school approach to developing proof-readers, buy our latest eBook:

In No More: My Pupils Can’t Edit, Felicity Ferguson & Ross Young invite schools and teachers to make proof-reading a rigorous and meaningful part of their class writing projects. Despite the fact that expectations for transcriptional accuracy have never been higher, schools and teachers often find it difficult to teach children to proof-read with precision and enthusiasm. This book looks to change that.

This practical guide offers an overview of The Writing For Pleasure Centre’s approach, and provides a progression for proof-reading from the EYFS-KS2. It also contains over 50 exemplar lessons taken from their affiliate schools. These lessons cover the EYFS Framework and National Curriculum objectives efficiently and effectively.

What’s special about this book is the way in which each lesson teaches children the whys of proof-reading procedures and illustrates how, as editors, they can use them for themselves. Children learn to make their writing ‘reader-friendly’ and ‘reader-ready’ prior to publication for real audiences.

*NEW eBook* No More: ‘My Pupils Can’t Edit!’ A Whole-School Approach To Developing Proof-Readers

In No More: My Pupils Can’t Edit, Felicity Ferguson & Ross Young invite schools and teachers to make proof-reading a rigorous and meaningful part of their class writing projects. Despite the fact that expectations for transcriptional accuracy have never been higher, schools and teachers often find it difficult to teach children to proof-read with precision and enthusiasm. This book looks to change that.

This practical guide offers an overview of The Writing For Pleasure Centre’s approach, and provides a progression for proof-reading from the EYFS-KS2. It also contains over 50 exemplar lessons taken from their affiliate schools. These lessons cover the EYFS Framework and National Curriculum objectives efficiently and effectively.

What’s special about this book is the way in which each lesson teaches children the whys of proof-reading procedures and illustrates how, as editors, they can use them for themselves. Children learn to make their writing ‘reader-friendly’ and ‘reader-ready’ prior to publication for real audiences.

£10.95 – Individual license

£50.75 – School/Institution license

or FREE for members

What is a Writing For Pleasure pedagogy?

Some years ago, we were teaching at our local primary school and we came to the conclusion that we were probably the worst teachers of writing in the whole entire world. We hated doing it, we hated teaching it, and our students got terrible results. Our students also hated writing and they hated us teaching it too! 

Research has since confirmed why this was, and it appears that we are far from alone. Many of you might feel like this too. The fact is that many of us didn’t receive the writerly education we should have had while we were at school. We know this because research shows that a great number of teachers feel deep shame about their own writing abilities. On top of this, many teachers have grown up to dislike writing. A friend of ours, Paul Gardner, conducted some research and found that less than 2% of teachers wrote with or for pleasure – half reported that they had never felt any pleasure from writing in their lives (Gardner 2014). The cherry on the cake is the research surrounding ITE. The majority of teachers around the world leave their teacher training feeling ill-prepared to teach writing (Young & Ferguson 2022).

This is a serious problem, because how we were taught writing at school has a strong influence on how we feel about the subject, how we think it should be taught and what we know about the subject – our writerly knowledge. Unfortunately, it appears from the research that, as teachers, we regularly copy the same failed writing teaching that we once received (Young & Ferguson 2021, 2022a). We should point out that there is of course a significant minority of teachers to whom this doesn’t apply – but it certainly applied to us.

We tried all the popular approaches in the UK at the time and none of them worked. We were frustrated. We wanted to do something about it. We decided that we would build a writing pedagogy from scratch and base it on what the science and research evidence said was the most effective and affecting practice (Young & Ferguson 2021, 2022a, 2022b). We were no longer going to leave things to chance. 

We conducted 43 literature reviews in total, spanning over 50 years of scientific research. First, we started with the meta-analyses. For those who might not be familiar with the term, a meta-analysis is where a researcher will group many scientific studies on a particular subject, for example writing teaching, in order to identify recurring patterns of effectiveness. We then read what case studies tell us about what the best performing writing teachers do in their classrooms which makes the difference.

We discovered that there are 14 enduring principles which represent the most effective teaching practice. These principles all have a track record of raising standards and accelerating progress in writing. The principles are:

  1. Build a community of writers
  2. Treat every child as a writer
  3. Read, share, think and talk about writing
  4. Pursue purposeful and authentic class writing projects
  5. Teach the writing processes
  6. Set writing goals
  7. Be reassuringly consistent
  8. Pursue personal writing projects
  9. Balance composition & transcription
  10. Teach daily mini-lessons
  11. Be a writer-teacher
  12. Pupil-conference: meet children where they are
  13. Connect reading & writing
  14. Interconnect the principles

Interestingly, we noted that there were also six affective needs (what can be called emotional needs) that teachers need to attend to so that they can help children write happily and successfully. These needs are:

Young & Ferguson’s (2021) hierarchy of emotional writing needs

Once these principles and affective needs were identified, each was given its own research review to help us better understand what we could be doing in our classroom that would actually make the difference. In the end, we decided to call our approach the Writing For Pleasure approach. And now, for us, Writing For Pleasure is nothing more than a synonym for pursuing world-class writing teaching.

We began using our approach and it was having a transformative impact on our students. We moved to another school to see if it would work in another context, and it did. We then started to write about the pedagogy online and other teachers started reporting that they were getting the same great results that we were. 

Fast forward to 2019, and we were lucky enough to be given a research grant in conjunction with the Goldsmiths’ Company and University Of Sussex. We went to see what it was these other ‘Writing For Pleasure’ teachers were doing. What was special about this study was that, to participate, the teachers had to show that they had a track record for accelerating children’s progress, and their students had to report that they loved to write and that they felt their affective writerly needs were being met.

What we found out from all this work has since been published as a book called Writing For Pleasure: Theory, Research & Practice (Young & Ferguson 2021) and the establishment of The Writing For Pleasure Centre.

The Writing For Pleasure Centre is now informed by over 600 pieces of literature, case study work, action research by teachers in our affiliate schools, and empirical research on the subject of teaching writing (Young & Ferguson 2022a).

The Writing For Pleasure approach involves children and teachers writing together every single day. They write for many different purposes, and for a variety of audiences. They are moved to write about what they are most knowledgeable and passionate about. They also write to deepen their responses and understandings of what they read. They write to transform their own (and others’) thinking about what they learn in the wider curriculum subjects. They write to entertain, to paint with words, to persuade and share their opinions, to teach others, to make a record of things they don’t want to forget, and to reflect on their own thoughts and personal experiences. They write about themselves and their cultures. They also write to reflect and sustain the cultures of people they might not have met. They share their writing and discuss their development with their peers, teachers and caregivers. They learn how to live the writer’s life.

Pupils explore new genres of writing through whole class writing projects. Together, they discuss the purpose of the writing project, explore its basic features, and study mentor texts together. Whilst doing this, they consider who they would like to write their pieces for and what they would like to write about most. Students are taught how to use the same features and expert techniques they identified from the mentor texts in their own compositions. They learn how to attend to their spellings, handwriting, grammar, and sentence construction. This helps them write happily and fluently. Pupils learn a whole host of craft knowledge – what we call craft moves. This includes writerly strategies and techniques for negotiating the writing processes. We want children to know how they can take a germ of an idea and see it through to publication independently and successfully. Students are supported by providing them with clear processes and ambitious writing goals. They are given ample time and instruction in how to plan and how to improve on what they have already written through specific revision and proof-reading sessions.

Pupils receive daily in-the-moment verbal feedback and responsive assessment-based individualised instruction through teacher-pupil conferencing. These conversations are designed to push the writer and move their writing forward. Pupils are given many opportunities to discuss their compositions with their teachers and their peers. At least one hour a day is devoted to the explicit teaching of writing, and children write meaningfully for a sustained period every single day. We believe this is the only way they can learn about the discipline of writing and of being a writer. Across a school day, children also have opportunities to write about their reading and in response to their learning in other subjects. Importantly, pupils have access to personal writing journals which travel freely between home and school. We want children to live the writer’s life and to be in a constant state of composition.

Genuine writing communities are created in classrooms. Children write in positive and enthusiastic writing environments which are headed up by passionate writer-teachers. Classrooms feel like a mixture of creative writing workshops and professional publishing houses. They are rigorous, highly-organised and reassuringly consistent. Pupils are encouraged to take risks and to be innovative, but also to write with focus and serious intent. Teaching is responsive – depending on what individual children need instruction in most. Whether they are in Nursery or Year Six and regardless of where they are in their language development or writerly experience, all children are treated as writers and are helped not only to write pieces which are successful in terms of the objectives of the curriculum but also meaningful to them as young authors.

Why not become a member of the Writing For Pleasure community? You can access our complete programme of study for EYFS-KS2 here.

*NEW COURSE* Developing independent greater-depth writers in Y2 & Y6

We are delighted to announce this new in-person CPD course in conjunction with Wandsworth council.

How do you make the greater-depth standard the standard? The focus of this course will be on how schools can develop independent greater-depth writers in their classrooms. This course will cover how to:

  • Build a culture of independence in your writing classroom.
  • Use teaching practices which naturally support the greater-depth statements.
  • Ensure your class produces 30+ unique pieces of writing within the parameters of your writing units.
  • Harness the power of self-regulation strategy instruction to ensure children’s writing is truly independent.
  • Use verbal feedback in a way which always promotes independence.
  • Encourage children to use what they learn from their reading in their writing.
  • Put a system in place for effective proof-reading.
  • Support pupils with EAL to be independent writers from day one.
  • Set up personal writing projects which children can craft at school and at home.

The first session will share how teachers can build a culture of independence in their writing classrooms before sharing how they can utilise teaching practices which naturally support the greater-depth statements. Subsequent sessions will build on these approaches, taking attendees’ responses and needs into account as the course develops. You will be encouraged to bring your pupils’ writing and your experiences to each of the sessions.

Session 1 (26/09/22 – 13.30 to 16.30)
●The principles for developing independent greater-depth writers.

Session 2 (21/11/22 – 13.30 to 16.30)
●Let’s have an Ideas Party! How to ensure you receive 30 unique pieces of
writing.
●From a germ of an idea to publication: How to guide children through the
writing processes.
●Reader-friendly and reader-ready: Let’s get proof-reading right.

Session 3 (16/01/23 – 13.30 to 16.30)
●Self-regulation strategy instruction: One of the most powerful teaching
practices a teacher of writing can use.
●Verbal feedback as responsive individualised instruction.

Session 4 (06/03/23 – 13.30 to 16.30)
●Setting ambitious writing goals.
●How children use their reading in their writing.

Session 5 (date tbc – 13.30 to 16.30)
●Supporting children with EAL to be independent writers.
●A constant state of composition: introducing personal writing projects.

Delegates will also receive a copy of the following The Writing for Pleasure Centre eBooks worth over £35:

  • No more: ‘I don’t know what to write…’ Lessons that help children generate great writing ideas for 3-11 year olds
  • No more: ‘My pupils can’t edit!’: A whole school approach to developing proof-readers
  • A guide to pupil-conferencing with 3-11 year olds: Powerful feedback & responsive teaching that changes writers
  • Getting success criteria right for writing: Helping 3-11 year olds write their best texts
  • A teacher’s guide to writing with multilingual children
  • A guide to personal writing projects & writing clubs for 3-11 year olds

Cost: £200 for 5 sessions:

DIY CPD for Writing For Pleasure 2.   Getting to know the children

This is the second of a series of blogs, written by a teacher for teachers, aimed at helping you prepare yourself as a Writing For Pleasure practitioner.  This particular blog asks you to think about all of the children in your class and their own interests and experiences so that you can better understand them as individuals and their writerly identities.

In Donald Graves’ book Writing: Teachers and Children at Work, he says ‘I think I know students […] until I challenge myself to write their names from memory’.  When he would ask teachers to do the same, ‘most had some blanks’.  He would do a memory activity (see the task below) with teachers as a way to get them thinking about their pupils – in particular about the ‘missing children’ who were not remembered – and write down the particular interests and knowledge funds of every child in the class.  

After you have met your new class for the first time – and hopefully this has happened before the end of the Summer term – try out a memory activity, like that suggested by Graves. Without knowing the children well enough in the first place, our teaching will not be as good as it could be. Make this a priority – try this now and keep doing this memory task once you’re with the class from September – at least once a half-term but preferably more often.

Task 1Test yourself to remember all of the children’s names in your class & list their experiences and interests.  10 mins each time.

See the appendix for a blank version that can be copied.

 When you do this, it is so important to check afterwards and draw a line to show the bottom of your list and then write down the names of all the children you did not remember below this line. 
You will find out lots about what the children enjoy, know and spend time thinking about from informal conversations, in items they bring to school or during sharing times (as well as from the next task).
Put an X in the ‘confirmed’ column when their experiences and interests that you think they have are confirmed during such opportunities from September onwards.

Each time you do this, compare how your understanding of the children’s experiences and interests changes and keep reflecting upon which children you still don’t remember (and why that might be).  Those children should (must) become your priority.

Those children for whom it is most difficult to come up with a territory or information are those who need it most.  They are often the children who find it difficult to choose topics, to locate a territory of their own. They perceive themselves as non-knowers, persons without turf, with no place to stand. Such an exercise works on a child’s voice, and begins the oral process of authenticating experience. 

From Writing: Teachers & Children at Work (Graves 1983 p.22)

When the new academic year begins, you can also ask the children directly about their interests and experiences (see the suggested proforma in the appendix) and use what the children tell you in order to create a document such as a ‘Things You Need to Know About [insert class name]’ book, which you could laminate and put into the class library for the children to read. 

Task 2: Survey the children about themselves and their interests.  With their permission, use this to create a ‘Things You Need to Know About…. ‘ book for the class library.  10 mins for survey; between 45-60 mins to create class book.

See the appendix for the blank survey. This can also be adapted for younger children, such as for those in KS1.

Along with your own writing river and reflections upon yourself as a writer and teaching of writing (see the previous blog in this series, DIY CPD for Writing for Pleasure 1. Being a Writer-Teacher), you will know yourself and your pupils better and therefore be an even better teacher.  

By Ellen Counter. Ellen has been a primary teacher for the past 15 years, working in three different London boroughs.  She has enjoyed teaching every age group during that time – from Nursery to Year 6. She completed her MA in Children’s Literature in 2013. Ellen is currently the Strategic English Lead in a seven-form primary school in East London.

With huge thanks to the late Donald Graves and his lasting inspiration.

Appendix

The components of an effective writing lesson

Experimental and random control trials, systematic reviews, meta-analyses and case studies together with research into what the most effective schools do (Young & Ferguson 2021a, 2022) all point to the efficacy of a Writing For Pleasure approach for conducting daily writing lessons. 

The components of an effective writing lesson typically involve a reassuringly consistent (though adaptable) routine of: mini-lesson, writing time, and class sharing. What is innovative here is that, after a mini-lesson, children are invited to apply what’s just been taught in a way that is relevant to their own writing (you can read more about this here).

The table below explains why this consistent approach is so useful and effective.

An excellent foundation and a good rule of thumb when you’re first setting up a routine for writing lessons is to follow this kind of order and timings:

Depending on the circumstances of your new class, you may find you need to build up to these kinds of timings at the beginning of the year. For example, your class may not have the emotional maturity or be developmentally ready to deal with a 10 minute mini-lesson. Similarly, they may not yet have the stamina to engage in writing for 40 minutes.

Once you and your students are comfortable with this kind of routine, you can begin to play around with it. Routine doesn’t mean rigidity –a good routine always has a component of flexible response. The routine’s importance is found in knowing what a good writing lesson typically involves and having a shared language you can use with your class. Your students will soon get used to language like: workshop time, mini-lesson, writing time, silent writing, social writing, conferencing time, class sharing and Author’s Chair (Harris 2021).  

Once comfortable, there are endless ways in which you can play around with these key combinations. Doug Kaufman (2022) suggests thinking about your daily schedule in a graphic form of boxes that help you to clarify the time you want to spend on different events and envision the multiple possibilities for structuring the daily routine to respond to pupils’ needs and personal agendas. Here are just a few examples:

It’s vital that we think carefully about the process goals we set for writing time too (Young & Ferguson 2021a, 2022). A process goal is something we would like children to achieve or get done by the end of a writing session. It’s important to say that by writing time we don’t necessarily mean drafting. Writing time simply means time engaged in the processes of writing. For example, writing time might mean: making front covers; working on plans; drafting a picturebook page; producing a single paragraph of writing; reading; conducting research; discussing and revising some already crafted writing; proof-reading for spellings; or publishing.

Here are some examples of the sorts of ways that you can set process goals for writing time:

The reason these components are so brilliant is because they offer the potential for explicit instruction, meaningful practice and formative assessment every single day. These are the absolute bedrocks of all teaching and learning.

By Doug Kaufman & Ross Young

References 

  • Ferguson, F., Young, R. (2021) A Guide To Pupil-conferencing With 3-11 Year Olds: Powerful Feedback & Responsive Teaching That Changes Writers Brighton: The Writing For Pleasure Centre
  • Harris, B. (2021) Author’s Chair [Online: writing4pleasure.com/authors-chair ]
  • Kaufman, D. (2022) Teacher, Inventor: How to Take Your Teaching Back from the Pre-Packaged Writing Program. Manuscript accepted for publication.
  • Whittick, L. (2020) Write a little – share a little [Online: writing4pleasure.com/write-a-little-share-a-little ]
  • Young, R., Ferguson, F. (2021) Writing For Pleasure: Theory, Research & Practice London: Routledge
  • Young, R., Ferguson, F. (2021b) Guide To Personal Writing Projects & Writing Clubs For 3-11 Year Olds Brighton: The Writing For Pleasure Centre
  • Young, R., Ferguson, F. (2022) Handbook Of Research On Teaching Young Writers Brighton: The Writing For Pleasure Centre
  • Young, R., Hayden, T. (2022) Getting Success Criteria Right For Writing Brighton: The Writing For Pleasure Centre