The Writing For Pleasure Centreโ€™s FREE Handbook Of Research On Teaching Young Writers *NEW 5th Edition*

This free handbook addresses some of the major aspects of teaching writing. The aim is to create an invaluable reference guide for all teachers. We hope to update this handbook every year to take account of the latest research and thinking. We would like this handbook to support teachers in developing sound subject knowledge and exceptional classroom practice. We have tried to make the research as accessible as possible. The handbook includes:

  • Over 1000 research entries covering the major aspects of developing students as writers. 
  • Short abstracts and keyword tags to help teachers find the research they are looking for.
  • An analysis of the analysis and what it is the best performing writing teachers do that makes the difference.
  • A chapter dedicated to each of the 14 principles of world-class writing teaching.
  • Research on the early teaching of writing including compositional development, phonics, encoding, spelling, letter formation and handwriting.
  • Extended entries on major topics such as speaking and listening, reading/writing connection, multilingualism, special educational needs and disabilities, and social and emotional disorders.
  • Focused chapters on the affective needs of student writers, including: self-efficacy (confidence), self-regulation (competence and independence), agency, motivation and writer-identity.
  • Essential literature and suggested reading offered at the end of each chapter.

This handbook is a useful resource for anyone interested in developing world-class writing teaching. Teachers should find what is shared within these pages utterly interesting, informed and helpful.

We have done our best with this fifth edition to cover many aspects of writing teaching in the best way we can. We have provided a variety of research, from different disciplines, and from a variety of perspectives. Weโ€™ve tried to provide a balance between the very latest emerging research and classic studies which contain profound insights and have stood the test of time. If you think some important research entries are missing, then please contact us. You can contact us through our website at: http://www.writing4pleasure.com/contact

New to this fifth edition:

  • Our handbook now comes in two volumes.
    • Volume one covers affective factors in childrenโ€™s writing development. It also summarises findings from meta-analyses, case studies, and organisational reports on world-class writing teaching.
    • Volume two presents the 14 principles of world-class writing teaching.

  • This edition also includes the following updates.
    • Additional reading on theories of writing development.
    • Recommended reading on initial teacher education.
    • Significant additions to the motivation and writer identity chapters.
    • Expanded commentary on writing interventions, supporting children with special educational needs, and developing multilingual writers.
    • A new section on parental/home support for writing
    • A new section on writing and AI, including the use of large language models.
    • Major additions on the importance of a consistent approach to teaching writing in the early years.
    • Further additions on supporting secondary students.
    • Expanded reading on early word writing, letter formation, handwriting, encoding, and spelling.
    • Significant new reading in the personal writing projects chapter.
    • Major additions to the reading and writing connection chapter.

Our subject knowledge series: What writer-teachers need to know. #2 ‘The cognitive process model’ – Linda Flowers & John Hayes

Welcome to our new blog series where BIG WRITING IDEAS ARE SIMPLY EXPLAINED! This series is dedicated to sharing key subject knowledge that can make you a better teacher of writing.

Each month, we will share a new concept or figure with you. Over time, we hope this series can build up your expertise. To follow the series, simply sign up to our newsletter here.

This month, we are looking at Linda Flowers & John Hayes.

๐Ÿ“ฃ The cognitive process model

โ€œThe process of writing is best understood as a set of distinctive thinking processes which writers orchestrate or organise.โ€ โ€“ Linda Flowers


๐Ÿง  The big idea

Flower and Hayes revolutionised how we understand writing – not just as putting words on a page but as a complex thinking process. Their model shows that writing involves multiple, overlapping mental activities like planning, translating ideas into text, and reviewing. Itโ€™s a dynamic, recursive process where writers constantly juggle goals, audience needs, and problem-solving.

In short: Writing isnโ€™t linear โ€“ itโ€™s a loop of thinking, writing, and revising.

The cognitive process model


๐Ÿ›๏ธ In context

YearEvent
1981Flower & Hayes publish their influential paper A Cognitive Process Theory of Writing
1980sโ€“90sTheir model reshapes composition studies and writing instruction
TodayFoundation of cognitive and process-oriented approaches to writing

๐Ÿ” Core concepts

๐ŸŸ  Planning
Deciding what to write, setting goals, and organising ideas.
๐Ÿ—ฃ๏ธ โ€œWhat do I want to say, who do I want to say it to, and how to I want to say it?โ€

๐ŸŸ  Translating
Turning ideas into actual words and sentences.
๐Ÿ—ฃ๏ธ โ€œHow do I express these ideas as words and sentences?โ€

๐ŸŸ  Reviewing
Rereading and revising text to improve clarity and effectiveness.
๐Ÿ—ฃ๏ธ โ€œIs this any good? What needs working on?โ€

๐ŸŸ  Recursive process
Writers donโ€™t move straight through these steps โ€” they loop back and forth, rethink, and revise constantly.

๐ŸŸ  Working memory and long-term goals
Writers juggle immediate sentence choices and their broader writing goals simultaneously.


๐Ÿ‘ค Key figures

๐Ÿ‘จโ€๐Ÿซ Linda Flower & John R. Hayes Cognitive psychologists and composition researchers who mapped out writing as a mental process, shifting teaching toward process and strategy.


๐Ÿ› ๏ธ In the writing classroom

โœ… Teach writing as a flexible, recursive process
โœ… Encourage planning and goal-setting before and during writing
โœ… Understand that revision is a key part of thinking and improving
โœ… Plan class writing projects in a way that manages studentsโ€™ cognitive load and focuses their attention


โš–๏ธ Criticism and debate

๐Ÿ”ธ Some say the model underestimates the social, motivational, and cultural influences on writing.
๐Ÿ”ธ Critics argue itโ€™s focused more on developing the individual writer than developing a social group of writers.
๐Ÿ”ธ Still highly influential in process-based writing pedagogy.


Find out more:

  • A Cognitive Process Theory of Writing by Linda Flower & John R. Hayes [LINK]
  • The Science Of Teaching Primary Writing by Ross Young & Felicity Ferguson [LINK]

Previous entries in the series

  1. โ€˜Writing as a processโ€™ โ€“ Donald Murray [LINK]

Why increasing the frequency and amount of writing time children have is important

Genius takes time.

Many primary classrooms do not give children enough time to write. If we rush writing, we get rushed and disappointing outcomes. Our aim has to be to help children produce the best writing they can.

Amount of writing time

Renowned writing researcher Steve Graham recommends a minimum of one hour each school day for writing. For children in the early years, this should be at least 30 minutes a day (Graham et al. 2012; see also LINK). Around half of this time should be devoted to instruction and delivering feedback. The other half is for children to write.

Writing is thinking. Children can only think at a superficial level if writing time is short. Bereiter & Scardamalia call this ‘knowledge telling’. To transform ideas while writing, students need time to explore and shape their thinking (LINK). Mihaly Csikszentmihalyi studied deep concentration. He calls this flow (LINK). He found that people reach their best thinking when they are given enough time to be absorbed in a task. Short lessons prevent children from reaching this kind of deep focus. They have to stop writing before they’ve really been able to get to work.

Frequency of writing time

Writer-teacher Donald Graves said that children become writers by writing often. He pointed out that writing once or twice a week forces children to start again each time. They never build momentum or the writer’s discipline. He suggested that children should have a writing lesson at least four times a week (Graves 1983). Teresa Creminโ€™s work also shows that time and space help children feel like authors. She found that when teachers write with their class, they come to realise just how much time is needed to craft meaningful and successful texts (Cremin et al. 2017).

In our own study of some of the most effective writing teachers in England (LINK), we found that practitioners who taught writing every day and gave protected time to writing, saw strong outcomes. Their lessons followed a reassuringly consistent daily routine (LINK). This wider research all supports Grahamโ€™s main message: frequent and extended writing lessons improve the quality of children’s writing (Graham & Perin 2007).

Schools that teach writing daily and for an hour are more likely to give children what they need to write their best possible texts. They give them time to generate ideas, plan, think, write, improve, proof-read and publish (Graham, 2019 and LINK).

Quality writing requires time.

References

  • Bereiter, C and Scardamalia, M (1987). The Psychology of Written Composition. Lawrence Erlbaum Associates.
  • Cremin, T, Myhill, D, Eyres, I, Nash, T, Wilson, A and Oliver, L (2017). Teachers as Writers. Arvon and Open University.
  • Csikszentmihalyi, M (1990). Flow: The Psychology of Optimal Experience. Harper and Row.
  • Graham, S (2019). Changing how writing is taught. Review of Research in Education, 43, 277 to 303.
  • Graham, S and Perin, D (2007). Writing Next. Alliance for Excellent Education.
  • Graham, S, Harris, K and Santangelo, T (2012). Teaching Elementary School Students to Be Effective Writers. Institute of Education Sciences.
  • Graves, D (1983). Writing: Teachers and Children at Work. Heinemann.
  • Kellogg, R (1996). A model of working memory in writing. In C Levy and S Ransdell (Eds), The Science of Writing, 57 to 71. Lawrence Erlbaum Associates.
  • Young, R and Ferguson, F (2021). Writing for Pleasure: Theory, Research and Practice. Routledge.

Our subject knowledge series: What writer-teachers need to know. #1 ‘Writing as a process’ – Donald Murray

Welcome to our new blog series where BIG WRITING IDEAS ARE SIMPLY EXPLAINED! This series is dedicated to sharing key subject knowledge that can make you a better teacher of writing.

Each month, we will share a new concept or figure with you. Over time, we hope this series can build up your expertise. To follow the series, simply sign up to our newsletter here.

We are starting off with a real pioneer: Donald Murray. He changed writing instruction by showing that both the finished text and the writerโ€™s ongoing development matter.

Murray taught us to ‘Teach the writer – not just the writing’ and showed that writing is first and foremost a process, which he described as ‘a way of thinking on paper’. He normalised the messiness of creation, reminding teachers that the writing process involves flexibility and that even so-called ‘writerโ€™s block’ is part of writing – a stage of ‘incubation’ where ideas form unseen.

By exploring Murray’s core concepts, you will gain a better approach to feedback, encourage revision and metacognition, and help your pupils develop and value their own unique writing habits.

๐Ÿ”„ Writing as a process

โ€œTeach writing as a process not a productโ€ โ€“ Donald M. Murray


๐Ÿง  The big idea

Donald Murray transformed writing instruction by focusing on the writerโ€™s process, not just the final product. He argued that writing is an act of discovery โ€“ a recursive journey where ideas emerge and evolve through drafting, revising, and reflection.

Rather than correcting studentsโ€™ writing, Murray believed teachers should coach writers, helping them understand how they write and how they can develop their unique voice over time.


๐Ÿ›๏ธ In context

YearEvent
1968Murray wins the Pulitzer Prize for journalism
1972Publishes Teach Writing as a Process Not Product
1970sโ€“80sHis ideas become foundational in writing education

๐Ÿ” Core concepts

๐ŸŸข Writing is a process
Professional and recreational writers donโ€™t write in one straight run โ€“ they plan, explore, rethink, and revise continuously.

๐ŸŸข Discovery through writing
Writers donโ€™t always start with clear ideas โ€“ they discover their ideas through the act of writing itself.

๐ŸŸข The writer at the centre
Students should be treated as apprentice authors, not just students doing assignments. Their interests, voices, and choices matter.

๐ŸŸข Teachers as coaches
Teachers should give feedback as readers, ask questions, and support the writerโ€™s growth over time โ€“ rather than acting as judges and editors alone.


๐Ÿ‘ค Key figure

๐Ÿ‘จโ€๐Ÿซ Donald M. Murray Journalist turned teacher. A key figure in the process writing movement, Murrayโ€™s essays and classroom work reshaped the way writing is taught from primary school through to university.


๐Ÿ› ๏ธ In the writing classroom

โœ… Emphasise idea generation, planning, drafting, and revision
โœ… Encourage reflection and metacognition
โœ… Respond to childrenโ€™s ideas and development, not just their use of grammar and conventions
โœ… Help students develop and value their own writing habits and writing process


โš–๏ธ Criticism and debate

๐Ÿ”ธ Some argue Murray was too student-centered and unstructured
๐Ÿ”ธ Still, Murrayโ€™s influence is visible in nearly every modern writing classroom


๐Ÿ’ฌ  Representative quote

โ€œTeach the writer – not just the writingโ€


Find out more:

  • A Writer Reforms (The Teaching Of Writing) Donald Murray & The Writing Process Movement, 1963-187 by Michael J. Michaud [LINK]
  • Teach Writing As A Process Not Product by Donald Murray [LINK]
  • Write to Learn by Donald Murrayย 
  • A Writer Teaches Writing by Donald Murray [LINK]
  • The Essential Don Murray: Lessons from Americaโ€™s Greatest Writing Teacher by Thomas Newkirk & Lisa C. Miller [LINK]

*NEW ONLINE TRAINING ANNOUNCEMENT* Improving childrenโ€™s reading AND writing: Connecting research and practice

Improving childrenโ€™s reading AND writing: Connecting research and practice

Four online sessions focusing on children’s reading and writing will take place in November and December from 4pm – 5pm. These sessions are designed for UK primary school teachers, primary school leaders, literacy leads and education consultants. 

ThE sessions are designed to provide research insights to support childrenโ€™s reading and writing acquisition and development. With a focus on supporting both reading and writing skill, all those attending will have greater access and insight into contemporary research to inform their classroom practice.

Participants will gain insight into implications for practice, a curated collection of key open access research articles and, if all four sessions are attended, a certificate of completion.

Sessions can be booked individually for ยฃ15 each or all four sessions can be booked at a discounted price of ยฃ50.

Sessions overview

Session 1: Learning to read – Thursday 20 November 2025, 16:00-17:00pm 

Delivered by Professor Sarah McGeown

This session highlights the core skills underpinning reading development, research-informed practice to support childrenโ€™s word reading, and the importance of nurturing an early love and interest in books, words, and stories. 

Session 2: Reading motivation and engagement – Thursday 27 November 2025, 16:00-17:00pm 

This session provides insight into the importance of reading motivation and engagement throughout primary school, research-informed principles to support reading engagement, and the reading, language, social and emotional benefits accrued from reading.

Session 3: Learning to write – Thursday 4 December 2025, 16:00-17:00pm 

Delivered by Ross Young

This session explores key aspects of writing development, research-informed strategies to support children as apprentice writers, and the importance of nurturing a lifelong love of writing.

Session 4: Writing motivation and engagement – Thursday 11 December 2025, 16:00-17:00pm 

This session provides insight into the importance of writing motivation and engagement throughout primary school, research-informed principles to support childrenโ€™s engagement with writing, and the social, emotional, and expressive benefits gained through the experience of being a young writer.

Biographies

Professor Sarah McGeown is Director of the University of Edinburghโ€™s Literacy Lab. She has published widely in academic and professional journals, with research focusing on early reading acquisition and development to motivation and engagement in reading. She is an advocate for research-practice partners and closing the gap between research and practice to improve childrenโ€™s reading experiences and outcomes. 

Ross Young is a former primary school teacher and co-founder of The Writing for Pleasure Centre. His work focuses on translating writing research into effective classroom practice, and he regularly collaborates with teachers and children in schools. He has written several books on teaching writing and leads professional development through organisations such as the UKLA. Ross is currently a PhD researcher at the University of Edinburghโ€™s Literacy Lab, studying childrenโ€™s writing lives in partnership with the National Literacy Trust. 

*NEW TRAINING* UKLA Student and Teacher Conference: Writing for Pleasure

  • Date: 15 November 2025
  • Time: 09:30ย –ย 12:30
  • Location: Online, via Zoom

The UKLA annual student and teacher online conference (2025) explores the notion of the teaching of writing for pleasure. Through the conference delegates will, through three expert-led sessions, develop their subject knowledge and gain practical strategies and lesson ideas to teach writing for pleasure confidently in the classroom. There will be a particular focus on writing for pleasure with SEND pupils.

Designed for both student teachers and teachers, this conference will prove to be invaluable professional development.

Through the day there will be interactive sessions from:

  1. Ross Young โ€“ founder of the Writing for Pleasure Centreย The 14 Principles which underpin Writing for Pleasure
  2. Billy Allgood โ€“ย  SENCO @ Gallions Primary Schoolย The benefits of writing for pleasure for SEND pupils
  3. Felicity Ferguson โ€“ founder of the Writing for Pleasure Centreย How to develop yourself as an excellent teacher of writing in whatever contextย you find yourself in.ย 

Booking open now:

  • Students ยฃ5
  • UKLA members ยฃ10
  • Non-members ยฃ20

Tickets are available to purchase here: https://www.trybooking.com/uk/events/landing/95913

*NEW BOOK* The Power Of Scaffolds: Utilising Posters & Other Tools In The Writing Classroom

In this essential new eBook, The Power Of Scaffolds: Utilising Posters & Other Tools In The Writing Classroom, Felicity Ferguson, Tobias Hayden & Ross Young provide practical strategies designed to give children the tools they need to write successfully, independently, and fluently.

Writing is inherently hard, and our job as teachers is to make it easier for young writers. While excellent instruction is key, children must retain and recall the content of writing lessons over time to develop their independence.

This book champions the use of simple, effective scaffolds (primarily posters and handouts) to overcome this obstacle. A writing poster is a large visual illustration of instruction about writing or being a writer, displayed for children, teachers, and teaching assistants to reference for as long as it is useful. These tools are applicable for all ages, from EYFS to Year 6.

Making and using posters is an excellent way to scaffold the writing process. The advice and clear examples within this book show how these scaffolds can:

  • Support instruction at every stage of the writing process.
  • Help you teach responsively.
  • Act as a ‘surrogate teacher’ when you are not immediately available.
  • Make it easier for children to remember and apply what they have learned.
  • Encourage true independence in writing.

SRSD: The research behind the scaffolds

A good poster is a vital component of Self-Regulating Strategy Development Instruction (SRSD). While the name sounds complex, SRSD simply means teaching children strategies that enable them to become independent writers by actively using what you have taught them. Research confirms that SRSD instruction is one of the most validated and effective practices a writing teacher can employ, yielding benefits for all children, particularly those with Special Educational Needs (SEND).

By creating and displaying thoughtfully constructed posters, you are reinforcing the quality instruction you are delivering in real-time.

Practical strategies: What you will learn

This lavishly illustrated book invites you to draw inspiration from posters made by teachers and used in real classrooms. It provides practical guidance on creating both temporary and permanent posters tailored to your classroom needs.

Key areas covered include:

  1. Qualities of a good Poster: You will learn that effective posters should be large, simple, clear, visually appealing, and focus on only one thing. They should utilise catchy titles and visual symbols to support retention.
  2. Teaching with two posters: The book advises creating two posters to support each lesson. Poster 1 (selling your craft move) should advertise the benefits and function of the writing technique or strategy you are teaching that day, while Poster 2 (modelling the craft move) shows how the teacher has used the move in their own writing.
  3. Reinforcing subject knowledge: The process of creating effective posters requires you to analyse the structure and function of the craft move you are teaching, which reinforces (and can add to) your own writing subject knowledge.
  4. Organised display: To avoid a cluttered classroom, the book guides you in placing and grouping posters according to the writing process or craft area, suggesting areas like The Ideas Cupboard or Functional Grammar Corner.
  5. Comprehensive coverage: The book provides examples of posters for all aspects of the National Curriculum (and beyond). We cover a wide range of writing stages and needs, including posters to support bookmaking (EYFS/KS1), generating ideas, grammar craft moves, sentence-level strategies, spelling, proofreading, and literary and rhetorical craft moves.

Maximising impact: Revision checklists

Crucially, the book also demonstrates how these scaffolds feed into other high-impact strategies, particularly revision checklist sessions.

Revision is about re-seeing and re-thinking drafted writing, allowing children the space to tackle higher-order writerly techniques. Revision checklists are powerful tools derived from the product goals (success criteria) established with the class. When children evaluate their writing against collaboratively generated product goals, research shows a remarkable positive effect on writing progress.

The book shows you how to turn your posters into revision checklists, ensuring your pupils are already familiar with the examples and instruction contained within them. By providing dedicated time and instruction for revision you can develop a community of writers, increase children’s academic progress, and boost their confidence.

Invest in your practice

This book is informed by ongoing work with classroom teachers and early years educators, grounded in scientific research. If you want effective ways to help all young writers retain and apply instruction independently, this eBook is for you!

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Our viewpoint: The use of AI in the teaching of writing

At its core, our position is simple: AI cannot writeยน. This is because AI cannot think, feel or draw on personal experiences. To write involves thinking, feeling and sharing meaning. All large language models do is generate syntax based on patterns in dataยฒ. Itโ€™s a simulation of language use without understanding. This carries implications for writers, teachers, and students.

Why AI generated syntax is not writing

  1. No thought, no consciousness, no experience. AI models lack lives. They do not think, feel, wonder, doubt, or imagine. They have no personal histories to draw on, no hopes, no fears, no embodied existence. Human writing grows out of lived experiences, emotion, sensory detail, uncertainty, revision, reflection and thought. These are things language models do not possess.
  2. Pattern without understanding. What language models do is statistical pattern-matching. They generate sequences of words based on probabilities from large datasets. It does not shape and make meaning. It carries no intention nor does it understand rhetorical nuance in the way a human does. It is a fake. A phoney.
  3. No agency, no intentionality As writers, we make choices: what to emphasise, what moral stance to take, which metaphor to extend and where to leave ambiguity. These choices are part of the writing process and the authorโ€™s voice. AI has no intentions. It cannot choose in the service of meaning beyond what its available data suggests.
  4. Lack of authentic revision, struggle, and joy The writing process is messy. We draft, we abandon, we rewrite, we confront frustration, failure, joy and discovery. But it is precisely this process that makes writing – writing. Out of the difficulty, pleasure and satisfaction comes growth. Writers experience satisfaction and pleasure in shaping a sentence that sings, surprising themselves with an idea, finding just the right word for the occasion and sharing their developing manuscript with othersยณ. Writing is relational too. It connects us to peers, mentors, readers and communities. AI knows nothing of this. It does not struggle but neither does it take delight. It does not revise with care nor does it feel the pride of authorship. It simply produces syntax based on data patterns. The writerโ€™s journey, both its frustrations and its thrills, is entirely absent.

Teachers who outsource their own writing

We must be clear: Teachers who turn to AI to produce โ€˜mentor textsโ€™ abdicate their responsibility as genuine writer-teachers.

Teachers of writing need to write themselvesโธ. Without fully engaging in writing, they are unable to authentically teach writing. Without undertaking a class writing project for themselves, they are in no position to appreciate where their students might need particular instruction or support. They also leave themselves unable to model the idea generating, planning, decision-making, risk-taking, revising, proof-reading, publishing and performing that writing requiresยณ. 

When a colleague lets AI generate syntax, they stand at the front of their class without the vital expertise and experiences required to be an effective teacher of that writing. AI cannot explain why a sentence was shaped a certain way, how a certain metaphor came about or why an idea was discarded and then brought back. Also, what message does this send? That writing is simply a product to produce on demand, not a process. All that is learnt in the crafting of writing can be replaced with automation. A writerโ€™s joy, struggle and growth is unnecessary. These are the wrong messages entirely. It is a betrayal of what it means to model the writerโ€™s life for studentsโด.

The call for โ€œAI-proofโ€ writing projects

If AI is going to saturate our cultural landscape, then teachers, scheme writers and assessment designers must respond by rethinking the kinds of writing projects they set. The future lies in writing projects that AI cannot possibly reproduce. These are writing projects that demand students to draw deeply on their own:

  • funds-of-knowledge (the personal expertise they accumulate from home, community and experience)
  • funds-of-identity (their lived histories, values, passions and perspectives)
  • funds-of-language (the registers, dialects and linguistic repertoires that make their writing voice distinct)
  • personal responses (insights, reflections, memories, emotions only they can access)

Such writing insists on authenticity. It asks students to inhabit the page with part of themselves: their thoughts, ideas, voice, experiences and their ways of seeing the worldโต. AI will never be able to replicate this kind of writing because AI has no self to draw from. Teachers, therefore, must design writing projects that insist on meaning over language patterns, originality over generic templates and humanity over writing simulationsยฒ. That is a necessary pedagogical shift.

When students turn to AI

If students (and teachers) are regularly using AI as a replacement for their own authorship, we must ask ourselves a serious question: Is there enough personal value in the class writing projects weโ€™ve designed?

Students reach for shortcuts when writing tasks feel meaningless, disconnected, or overly formulaicโท. The solution is not to tighten surveillance but to design projects that genuinely matter to young writers. Again, these will be projects that invite them to draw on their own experiences, funds-of-knowledge, and sense of identityโต. When students are invested in a piece of writing, when it feels like it is theirs, they are far less likely to want an algorithm to do it for themโถ.

AI cannot assess what matters most

Teachers should resist using AI to assess childrenโ€™s writing. While AI can provide surface-level feedback on grammar, spelling, or sentence variety, it will never be able to evaluate the aspects of writing we value most: meaning, voice, originality, authenticity, and the emotional and intellectual impact of a piece.

Some argue that AI can handle assessing the transcriptional aspects of a student’s writing rather efficiently, supposedly freeing teachers up to focus more on higher-order concerns like voice and meaning. We are not convinced. As we know only too well, what becomes important in assessment arrangements is what becomes important in our teaching. To delegate assessment to AI is to miss the very point of what reading and assessing studentsโ€™ writing is all about.

What this means in practice

AI as a tool, not an author. We regard AI as a compositional assistant like a grammar or spell-checker.  For students who experience writing as anxiety or paralysis, AI may reduce their fear of the blank page, allowing them to experiment more freely or approach revision with greater confidenceโท. While AI can offer suggestions, alternative phrasing, or surface-level support, the human writer must, within this cognitive partnership, remain in authorial control: steering, revising, choosing, and rejecting. The final text must remain authored.

Teachers should ask students to compare their own writing with AI-generated outputs and critique the differences. In this way, AI can function as a mirror, helping students notice what is inauthentic about a machineโ€™s syntax and clarify what is distinctive and special about their own writing.

Transparency, fairness, digital literacy and ethical use of AI If teachers use AI, they must be transparent about how and why they have done so. Students deserve to know whether a text has been wholly human-written or partially generated by an algorithm. Anything less risks creating a double standard, with teachers relying on tools that students are forbidden to use. By openly sharing drafts, prompt entries, and AI-generated inputs, teachers model honesty and fairness, allowing students to make informed choices about their own AI-related writing practices. What matters most is integrity: students should experience an authentic apprenticeship in writing, not a concealed dependence on technology.

Pedagogical clarity: In writing classrooms, AI should never replace teacher modelling, meaning-making, voice, invention, idea generation, planning techniques, or the teaching of revision and proofreading strategies.

Our hope and ambition

Children and young people believe in the pleasure and satisfaction of human authorshipโท. Itโ€™s our view that students want to say something with originality, see the world in unique ways, connect with their readers emotionally and intellectually, and most importantly, surprise and develop themselves as authors. We want students and teachers to stay in contact with the craft of writing and not hand it over to machinery.

We must aim to consider large language models critically and transparently. We mustn’t lose sight of what being a writer-teacher is and what it means to teach and model writingโธ. In every instance, the human author must remain the agent, the thinker, the feeler, the asker of questions, the entertainer, the painter of words, the sharer of knowledge, insight, experience and personal expertise.

AI canโ€™t write – only humans can.

References

  1. Warner, J. (2025). More than words: How to think about writing in the age of AI. Hachette UK.
  2. Sharples, M., & y Pรฉrez, R. P. (2022). Story machines: How computers have become creative writers. London: Routledge.
  3. Young, R., & Ferguson, F. (2021). Writing for pleasure: Theory, research and practice. Routledge.
  4. Kaufman, D. (2002). Living a literate life, revisited. English Journal, 91(6), 51-57. 
  5. Young, R., Ferguson, F., Kaufman, D., & Govender, N. (2022). Writing realities. Brighton: The Writing For Pleasure Centre.
  6. Young, R., Ramdarshanโ€Bold, M., Clark, C., & McGeown, S. (2025). โ€˜It’s healthy. It’s good for youโ€™: Children’s perspectives on utilising their autonomy in the writing classroom. Literacy
  7. Picton, I., Clark, C., & Bonafede, F. (2025). Young People’s Use of Generative AI to Support Literacy in 2025. National Literacy Trust.
  8. Smith, J., & Wrigley, S. (2015). Introducing teachersโ€™ writing groups: Exploring the theory and practice. Routledge.

Further recommended reading:

  1. ‘The dangers of using AI to grade: Nobody learns, nobody gains’ by Marc Watkins [LINK]
  2. Sharples, M. (2022). Automated essay writing: An AIED opinion.ย International journal of artificial intelligence in education,ย 32(4), 1119-1126.
  3. Peer & AI Review + Reflection (PAIRR) [LINK]

Insights from the National Literacy Trustโ€™s โ€˜Children & Young Peopleโ€™s Writing In School 2025โ€™

On the 7th of October 2025, the National Literacy Trust published findings from its newest survey entitled: Children & Young Peopleโ€™s Writing In School in 2025. It gathered views from around 15,000 children and young people aged 8-18 from 90 schools across the UK. The report examines their views on writing and on the writing instruction they receive. By listening to the voices of young writers, the study looks to better understand the disconnect between curriculum requirements, governmental policy and writing as a personal and socially meaningful practice.

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As teachers, we work hard to equip children and young people with the essential skills they need to thrive in the broadest sense. Writing is one of the most fundamental of these skills, crucial not just for academic success but for self-expression, social connection and future career prospects. Yet, the National Literacy Trustโ€™s latest data paints a worrying picture of a deepening crisis in writing attainment and motivation across England.

In 2025, around 30% of 11-year-olds in England left primary school unable to write at the minimum expected standard. This attainment gap is concerning as is the motivational landscape. Only around 30-40% of students actually enjoy writing at school.

In addition: 

  • Gender: More girls (44%) than boys (34%) enjoy writing at school.
  • Age: Enjoyment drops significantly with age. 50% of children aged 8-11 enjoy writing but this goes down to around 30% among 14-16-year-olds, suggesting a significant dip during mid-adolescence. Interestingly, enjoyment then increases slightly amongst 16-18 year olds to just under 40%. Of course, none of this is anything to celebrate.
  • Socioeconomic status: Children and young people receiving Free School Meals (FSMs) report enjoying writing more (41%) than their non-FSM peers (37%).

1. The relationship between confidence and enjoyment 

The link between confidence and enjoyment is critical for classroom practice. Nearly 90% of students who enjoy writing at school consider themselves to be accomplished writers.

Itโ€™s very difficult to write with enjoyment if you feel youโ€™re not very good at it. Confidence is one of the biggest predictors of childrenโ€™s writing achievementยน. So, what practices have a track record for improving childrenโ€™s writerly confidenceยฒ? 

  1. Study mentor texts [LINK] With students, study and discuss texts that actually realistically match the type of writing they are being asked to write for themselves. This provides them with examples to emulate and learn from. This builds up their writerly confidence.
  2. Establish success criteria together [LINK] While reading mentor texts, collaborate with students to identify the techniques necessary for crafting their own high-quality texts. Make a commitment to teach these techniques, developing a sense of ownership and confidence among your students.
  3. Model craft moves [LINK] Demonstrate how to use a craft move before inviting students to do the very same in the context of their own writing. Modelling provides clarity and confidence, helping students grasp concepts more effectively.
  4. Set process goals [LINK] Encourage students to focus on a specific goal during writing time. By breaking down the writing process into small manageable chunks, students can see themselves making progress every day and this breeds confidence.
  5. Support children to choose their own writing topics [LINK] There are cognitive and motivational benefits to supporting children to choose their own writing ideas within the parameters of a class writing project. Being able to draw on a topic stored in their long-term memory (and one they are highly motivated to write about) fills them with writerly confidence.
  6. Teach the writing processes [LINK] Design class writing projects that encompass all stages of the writing process, from generating ideas to publishing. Allocate time for instruction on each stage. This establishes a sense of daily progress, reassurance and success.
  7. Provide verbal feedback [LINK] Provide students with personalised feedback on their writing, both from their teacher and their peers. Effective verbal feedback reinforces successes and nudges students to apply constructive feedback quickly and confidently.

2. Redefining purpose: Intrinsic and external expectations

When the NLT asked students why they are moved to write, their answers revealed what they perceive the purpose of writing at school to be. Their reasons for writing were often shaped by external expectations and pressures. Indeed, 40% of children and young people admitted they wrote solely out of compliance or to avoid punishment. Some students did share other motivations. For example:

  • To achieve good marks (37%). 
  • To secure better job opportunities (27%).
  • To express their creativity (35%)
  • To explore ideas (34%)
  • To reflect on and deal with their emotions (24%)
  • To better understand new learning (24%)

It can be useful to consider why children are motivated to write at school. Research consistently shows that students who write for external, teacher-controlled reasons tend to demonstrate poorer writing performance. In contrast, intrinsic motivation is linked with better outcomesยณ. However, it is important to recognise that extrinsically motivated young writers can also thrive, particularly when external rewards or recognition align with their personal goals and interests anywayโด.

Itโ€™s very difficult to write at your best if youโ€™re not motivated. Pupils who are motivated to write are more likely to: put in more effort, persist for longer, pay more attention, show more enthusiasm and work harder to solve their own writing problemsโต. Itโ€™s therefore important that we nurture the โ€˜willโ€™ to develop the โ€˜skillโ€™. A drop in motivation is a serious threat to student engagement.

  1. Embrace intrinsic value: Writing in school should be framed as a personally and socially profound activity, one that helps students make and share meaning, develop their ideas and understanding, cultivate their artistry and imagination, and articulate their thoughts, funds-of-knowledge, opinions, and feelings. By doing so, they can achieve exceptional academic outcomes.
  2. Not either/or: Students who view themselves as good writers are motivated by academic goals, intrinsic factors like self-expression and making social connections with others through writing.

3. Teaching the writing processes: Confidence gaps and strategy use

A common misconception is to assume that students are either confident and competent writers or theyโ€™re not. In reality, their confidence can be subject to change depending on what aspect of the writing process they currently find themselves in. For example:

  • Pupils are most confident in generating writing ideas (73%)
  • Students are not confident to proof-read (50%) 
  • Students also lack confidence in sharing, performing and publishing their writing (43%)
  • Pupils lack confidence in revising (53%)

Itโ€™s very difficult to produce your most meaningful and academically successful writing if you donโ€™t have the strategies to do so. Children who know the writing processes, and have internalised strategies and techniques for negotiating them successfully, produce better writingโท.

  • Teach planning techniques [LINK] Students appreciate being taught how to use a variety of intuitive planning strategies.
  • Plan revision sessions into your class writing projects [LINK] Students showed an overwhelming preference for experimenting and revising their writing but only after theyโ€™ve drafted.
  • Explicitly model how proof-readers edit [LINK] Model an aspect of proof-reading in your own writing before inviting pupils to do the same during that dayโ€™s writing time.
  • Establishing a publishing goal for class writing projects with your class [LINK] Children appreciate being invited to consider whom they want to share or perform their writing to, and how they wish to publish it, as part of a class writing project.

Utilising self-regulation strategies in the face of difficulty 

When students get stuck, their most common response is to stop and think (43%), or to ask for help (24%). However, only a minority (16%) of students reported independently trying different things out when stuck, demonstrating a lack of self-regulation. The link between enjoyment, confidence, and self-regulation is profoundโท.

  • More of those who enjoyed writing persevered and tried new strategies (20%) and fewer gave up (3%) compared with those who didnโ€™t enjoy writing (13% gave up).
  • Those who rated themselves as good writers were more inclined to pause and reflect or try out a new strategy.

Itโ€™s very difficult to enjoy or succeed at writing if you feel like you always need assistance. Developing childrenโ€™s self-regulation skills is probably the most effective thing a teacher of writing can do in their classroomโท. So, what does this mean?

Get your writing instruction right [LINK]. Self-Regulated Strategy Development (SRSD) is by far the most thoroughly researched and consistently effective approach to teaching writing. It explicitly teaches students evidence-based strategies for generating ideas, planning, drafting, revising, and proof-reading, while also developing their ability to monitor and manage their own writing process. SRSD blends cognitive strategy instruction with self-regulation techniques, helping children not just to know what good writing involves, but how to do it for themselves. Studies show that SRSD benefits struggling and proficient writers alike, improving both the quality and quantity of their writing. However, despite its strong evidence base and adaptability across ages, genres, and abilities, SRSD remains virtually absent from most UK classrooms. Few teachers encounter it in their initial training, and fewer still receive professional development in how to implement it. As a result, one of the most effective tools for improving writing outcomes (and for giving children the confidence to see themselves as independent writers) remains unused in the very places where it is needed most.

4. The social and emotional landscape: Anxiety and dependence

The social and emotional environment of the writing classroom profoundly shapes student engagementโต. At present, writing evokes considerable apprehension and anxiety in pupils.

  • Worrying about correctness at the wrong time: One in three students worries about their grammar, punctuation and spelling while they are drafting. 
  • Avoidance: Three in ten avoid experimentation for fear it might go wrong. A quarter of pupils felt discouraged from writing altogether due to their teacher potentially identifying mistakes.
  • Widespread fear: While anxiety was highest among poor writers, fear was widespread even amongst those who rated themselves as good writers.

Anxiety is the enemy of good writing. Students are often afraid of making errors while drafting, worrying that these mistakes will be seen as unacceptable or as evidence of poor writing. This has serious consequences: children who experience writing anxiety typically produce less, do only the minimum required, and avoid taking creative risksโต.

Itโ€™s difficult to enjoy or produce your best writing in a climate of fear. Research suggests that the culture of writing in some schools places excessive emphasis on accuracy at the wrong stage of the writing processโธ. It may be that colleagues would benefit from CPD in how to plan a writing unit [LINK] and how to deliver sympathetic and useful feedback to pupils [LINK]. 

5. A klaxon call for collaboratively-controlled writing projects   

  • A call for structure, guidance and instruction: Nearly half of the students surveyed expressed a preference for clear, structured guidance from their teachers on how to craft a great piece of writing.
  • Desire for some authorial control: Simultaneously, autonomy was a massive motivator. Half of students said they would write more, and with greater frequency, if given trust and guidance to choose their own writing topics within the parameters of class writing projects.

This is not a rejection of structure. Students appreciate structure and reassuringly consistent routinesยนโธ. Rather, it is a call for scaffolding that empowers them to exercise their own authorial agency.

  1. Implement collaboratively-controlled writing projects: Teachers should design class writing projects which are collaboratively-controlled by teachers and pupils togetherยณ. 
  2. Support students to find value: Most students recognised the value of writing. However, over half of those who rated themselves as poor writers believed that โ€˜schooled writingโ€™ lacked meaning or an authentic purpose. We must consistently provide purposeful and authentic class writing projectsโน.

6. Igniting the desire to write: The catalysts for engagement

Understanding what moves students to write most is both affective and effective practiceโต. Having authorial control was the strongest motivator:

  • Choice over writing topic: Students cited being supported to choose what they wanted to write about as their greatest cognitive and motivational driverยนโฐ.
  • Choice over style and form: 30% wanted to decide on the form or style of their writing.
  • Personal expression: 28% want permission to express their own thoughts, funds-of-knowledge and opinions through their writing.
  • Utilising intertextuality: 27% want permission to riff off their favourite authors to produce their own writingยนยน.

Perhaps understandably, only 16% saw value in being given a writing prompt. This is probably because it represents whatโ€™s called โ€˜an empty choiceโ€™ยนยฒ. 

The desire for some authorial control is linked to engagement: those who enjoy writing are much more likely to be motivated by creative freedom and personal expression. When given the support to choose their own topics and forms, students express overwhelming preferences for class projects that are exciting, personally meaningful, and allows for exploration:

  • Topics: Preferences are varied, including writing about horror, historyยนยณ, mysteries, sportยนโด, adventure and murder cases. Students also want to share, through writing, their own funds-of-knowledge and cultural passionsยนโต. They also desire opportunities to write about real-world issues that matter to them personallyยนโถ.
  • Genres: Fiction and poetry dominate, with genres such as fantasy, detective fiction, lyrics, and script writing repeatedly mentioned. There is also notable enthusiasm for writing intended for performance and for forms inspired by visual media, such as comics and manga  [LINK]. Students would also value learning how to write personal narratives, such as memoirs [LINK]. 

Conclusion

The findings from this report compel us to rethink not just how we teach writing, but whyยนโท. We see a clear tension: students value writing yet many feel increasingly anxious and disengaged when writing at school. Writing is most meaningful when students can relate it to their own lives and interact with others as authors. After all, writing is about making and sharing meaningโต.

With this in mind, the most powerful catalysts for pupil engagement lie in helping students find intrinsic value in their writing: personal relevance, emotional resonance, authorial control, and social interaction with readers. By embracing teaching practices that combine explicit instruction, modelling, and guidance with opportunities for choice and supportive writing processes, we can move beyond writing as formalism and unlock its full potential as both a critical learning tool and a powerful form of self-expression.

References

  1. Self-efficacy [LINK]
  2. The enduring principles of effective writing teaching [LINK]
  3. โ€˜It’s healthy. It’s good for youโ€™: Children’s perspectives on utilising their autonomy in the writing classroom [LINK]
  4. Reflexive writing dialogues: Elementary studentsโ€™ perceptions and performances as writers during classroom experiences [LINK]
  5. Motivating writing teaching [LINK]
  6. See โ€˜teach the writing processesโ€™ [LINK] and โ€˜self-regulationโ€™ [LINK] for more.
  7. Self-regulation [LINK]
  8. Debunking edu-myths: Writing errors form bad habits [LINK]
  9. Pursue authentic and purposeful writing projects [LINK] and โ€˜Establishing publishing goals for class writing projects [LINK]
  10. The cognitive and motivational case for inviting children to generate their own writing ideas [LINK]
  11. Intertextuality. The glue that binds reading for pleasure and writing for pleasure together? [LINK]
  12. When choice motivates and when it does not [LINK]
  13. Historical accounts/essays [LINK], biographies [LINK] and peopleโ€™s history [LINK]
  14. Match reports [LINK]
  15. Writing realities framework [LINK]
  16. Discussion essays [LINK], persuasive letters [LINK], advocacy journalism [LINK], community activism [LINK] and social/political poetry [LINK]. 
  17. โ€˜Teachersโ€™ orientations towards teaching writing and young writersโ€™ [LINK] and โ€˜Six discourses, four philosophies, one framework: A critical reading of the DfEโ€™s writing guidanceโ€™ [LINK]
  18. Be reassuringly consistent [LINK]

Teaching the writing processes to children

The act of teaching writing to children has undergone significant evolution over the centuries. While writing itself is an ancient skill, explicit instruction in how to write, particularly through the lens of โ€˜the writing processes,โ€™ is a relatively recent pedagogical developmentยน. 

This article explores the history of how teachers have taught children the art and craft of writing before giving advice on how you can do it too.

Early approaches to writing instruction (1800-1960s)

In the 19th century, writing instruction in schools was largely focused on mechanics like penmanship, spelling, grammar, and transcription. Writing was more about accuracy and obedience to conventions than making and sharing meaning, creativity or individual expression.

During this period, teachers rarely emphasised the writing process. Writing was seen primarily as a product (something finished and polished in a single session) rather than as something to be moulded and crafted over time.

In the mid 20th century, educational reformers began to see the value in students expressing their own thoughts through original compositions. However, in this more student-centered model, instruction often lacked a clear structureยฒ. Children were simply asked to write but not necessarily taught how to generate ideas, plan, draft, revise, proof-read or publish their manuscripts. This gap set the stage for a more formalised approach to teaching writing.

The Dartmouth Conference and the influence of John Dixon (1960s)

A pivotal moment in the history of writing instruction came with the Dartmouth Conference of 1966 – an international gathering of British and American educators that aimed to redefine the teaching of English. The conference catalysed a shift from formalist, prescriptive models of writing to more dynamic, writer-centred approaches.

British educator and researcher John Dixon published his influential report, Growth Through English, shortly afterward. In it, he argued that writing should not be taught as a fixed body of knowledge or a set of rigid forms, but as a tool for personal growth, meaning-making, and social interaction. Dixon proposed that students develop as writers through:

  • Expressing their own experiences, thoughts, knowledge, feelings and ideas
  • Engaging in meaningful writing projects
  • Writing in a variety of genres and for different audiences
  • Reflecting on their language use

Dixon categorised language use into four broad modes – personal, poetic, transactional, and exploratory – each serving different writerly purposes. He emphasised the importance of teacher responsiveness, flexibility, and encouraging student agency.

The Dartmouth movement laid the philosophical and pedagogical foundation for what would become the process writing movement. It framed writing as a developmental act, one rooted in the lived experience of the learner โ€“ an idea that would deeply influence writer-teachers like Donald Graves in the decades that followed.

The emergence of the writing processes (1970sโ€“1980s)

The modern concept of โ€˜the writing processesโ€™ began to take shape in the 1970s and 80s. Influential researchers and educators such as Janet Emig, Linda Flower, John Hayes, Donald Graves and Donald Murray revolutionised writing instruction by promoting a process-oriented approach.

This method emphasised writing as a recursive process with several key stages:

  • Generating ideas
  • Planning
  • Drafting
  • Revising (re-seeing, re-envisioning and otherwise reshaping content)
  • Proof-reading (checking adherence to conventions, grammar, punctuation, spelling)
  • Publishing (sharing with an audience)

Through this framework, students were encouraged to view writing as a tool for thinking, feeling, and communication, rather than merely a writing performance to be judged by the end of a single lesson.

Donald Graves and the birth of process-based writing instruction

One of the most pivotal figures in the development of process-based writing instruction was Donald Graves, whose research in the 1970s-1980s fundamentally changed how teachers approached teaching writing to children.

Graves’ landmark study took place in a New Hampshire elementary school, where he conducted intensive observations of six- and seven-year-olds as they wrote. Using audio recordings, writing samples, classroom observations, and student interviews, Graves sought to understand what young writers actually did when they wrote. His findings were both surprising and transformative.

Graves discovered that even the youngest of children were capable of deep thinking, self-direction, and revision when given time, instruction, agency, and support. He found that children wrote best when they:

  • Were supported to choose their own writing topics
  • Given time to write their best pieces
  • Received consistent instruction and feedback from teachers and peers
  • Viewed themselves as real authors with something valuable to say and share

His research culminated in the seminal book Writing: Teachers & Children At Work, which laid out not just his findings but a practical vision for writing instruction. Graves argued that writing should be a daily activity, grounded in real purposes and audiences, and that teachers should serve as fellow writers and instructors โ€“ not just evaluators.

The post-process movement: A necessary rethinking

By the 1990s, scholars in composition studies began questioning the dominance of the process model in writing instruction. The so-called post-process movement did not reject the value of the writing process altogether, but it emphasised that writing is far too complex and idiosyncratic to be fully captured in a single, generalised sequence of steps. Post-process theorists argued that there is no single โ€˜correctโ€™ writing process – different writers use different processes, in different combinations, and at different times, depending on the writerly situation.

For classroom teachers, this post-process movement serves as a reminder that writing is more than a set of steps to follow. It calls for instruction that values diverse writing practices, and emphasises critical thinking about language and purpose.

Modern day

In recent years, studies have built on the foundations laid by Graves and others to offer a more contemporary, evidence-rich model of the writing process approach.

Research evidence continues to deepen our understanding of how children can be taught not only to write, but to think as writers. 

While early process models gave some structure to writing instruction, more recent research provides precise, flexible, and effective ways of helping children navigate the complexities of writingยณ.

Four of the most useful frameworks currently shaping writing pedagogy are:

  1. The rhetorical situation approachย 
  2. Childrenโ€™s production strategies for writing
  3. The writing process in the early years
  4. Ellen Counterโ€™s โ€˜Writing Houseโ€™

1. The rhetorical situation approach

A writing classroom, if it is to be authentic, must regularly pursue whatโ€™s called rhetorical purpose. This is the idea that writers write because:

  1. They have something to say
  2. They have a reason for saying it
  3. They have someone to say it to

They are moved to writeโด. 

This is at the core of what composition, rhetoric, creative writing and journalism courses all call โ€˜the rhetorical situationโ€™โต: there is a writer, there is an audience, there is a purpose, and there is a message.

A class writing project therefore begins with a class knowing they have something to say and setting themselves an authentic and purposeful writing goal through which to say it (see LINK for more details). For example: to craft persuasive letters to people in positions of authority, memoirs for loved ones, information texts for their mates, or short stories for the younger children in the school. 

Once that intention has been set, teachers and students look outward to high-quality mentor texts that resemble the kind of writing they are looking to produce for themselves. This is reading as a writer: noticing structure, studying grammatical, rhetorical and literary craft moves, analysing authorial voice, and borrowing writerly techniquesโถ.

Taken from Reading In The Writing Classroom (Young & Ferguson 2024), here are just some of the things you can look for and discuss as you read as writers:

And here are some of the writerly conversations you might have.

โ€œChildren read stories, poems and letters differently when they see these texts as things they themselves could produce.โ€ย – Frank Smith

This approach mirrors how writers actually work. While we in no way seek to diminish the importance of children developing as readers, we need to be clear that, in the writing classroom, writing should be the driver for reading. Reading should be in the service of the writersโ€™ goals.

Here is a beautiful representation of what we are talking about. On the display, we can see just some of the high-quality commercial texts children have been reading as part of their fairytale project. In addition, we can see how writer-teachers have shared their own fairytales as mentor texts too. All this rich reading has resulted in the class coming up with their own success criteria for the project: the things they believe theyโ€™ll have to do or include to write their own great fairytales too. 

In a writing classroom, the act of reading is responsive, deep, and authentic. Children and teachers study texts together because they know it helps them grow as writers. High-quality mentor texts are chosen because they match the classโ€™ writing project (you can see examples here). This is the real apprenticeship of writing. It gives students agency, craft knowledge, and a deep sense of why being a writer matters.

โ€œTo learn how to write for newspapers you must read newspapers. For magazines, browse through magazines. To write poetry, read it.โ€ย ย – Frank Smith

For teachers like Sam Creighton, who love reading, such an approach is a dream come true as he finally gets to expose his class to loads of his favourite high-quality texts. Here are just some of the texts he plans to share with his class as part of their memoir writing project. 

2. Childrenโ€™s production strategies for writing

As part of our work devising a conceptual framework for writing teaching, which we called The Writing Map, we described what young writers are doing as they make writing. When a child settles down to write, they will: 

Conceptualise As youโ€™ve already read, conceptualising a piece of writing involves establishing the rhetorical situation. Consciously or subconsciously, a young writer will consider the purpose and audience for their writing. 

As teachers, we can support children with this. For example, teachers and children, together, can establish a publishing goal for a class writing project [LINK] before reading as writers [LINK].

Generate ideas Next, your young writers will generate ideas of what it is they would like to share with their reader(s). Again, as teachers, we should help and support children by teaching them idea generation techniques that writers actually use [LINK].

Translate This is where your young writers have to convert the ideas they have in their heads into possible phrases and sentences. Teachers can support this process in three ways:

  1. Ask children to draw their ideas first.
  2. Invite children to talk about (and otherwise ‘tell’) their drawings with us and their friends.
  3. Model a planning strategy that we used, before inviting children to use the same strategy for themselves [LINK].

Transcribe Transcription includes attending to letter formation, handwriting (or typing), and spelling. At this point, children must physically make their marks on paper or screen. These skills support children in getting their ideas down in a way that can be read by others, but the accuracy of spelling and handwriting will naturally be variable at this stage. What matters most is that children can record their thinking; refinements to accuracy will be revisited later during the reconceptualise phase. 

However, over time, it is important that these transcriptional skills become increasingly fluent and automatic [LINK]. This fluency develops through a balance of regular spelling and handwriting instruction alongside meaningful opportunities to write [LINK].

Reconceptualise This is actually something children are doing all the time. They will regularly stop, think, rethink, draw, redraw, share, discuss, re-read, revise, proof-read and perform their developing compositions. Teachers can support childrenโ€™s reconceptualisation processes by ensuring that they: 

  • Have regular moments during writing time to stop and share what they have crafted so far that day. For example, by giving children class sharing and Author’s Chair time [LINK].ย 
  • Provide children with explicit revision instruction and revision checklists [LINK].ย 
  • Engage in systematic and daily pupil-conferencing with their pupils [LINK].
  • Provide ample opportunities and instruction in how to proof-read their manuscripts in preparation for publication or performance [LINK].

Finally, we can personify the production strategies children use to craft text as if they were being undertaken by different people. In reality, of course, these are done by the individual writer. These people would include:

It’s important to remember that a piece of writing will move between these four people all the time. For example, the evaluator might have to go and talk to the proposer. The translator and transcriber are likely to be in back and forth conversation too.

3. The writing process in the early years

What does the writing process look like for the youngest of children? Well, having observed children writing for a number of years, weโ€™ve noticed that a developmentally appropriate writing process for the EYFS-KS1 looks a little something like this:

We talk At this stage, children are often developing their ideas and translating those ideas through spoken language. Talking helps them to clarify their thinking, play with word choices, and rehearse the structure of what it is they want to say. Children talk their texts into being. As you can see, talk is vital at all parts of a young writerโ€™s process. For example, children talk with one another before they write, as they write and after they write. These interactions occur in different ways and can include:

  • Idea explaining Children share what they plan to write about during the session with others.
  • Idea sharing Children work in pairs or small โ€˜clustersโ€™ to co-construct their own texts together.
  • Idea spreading One pupil mentions an idea to their group. Children then leapfrog on the idea and create their own texts in response too.
  • Supplementary ideas Children hear about a childโ€™s idea, like it, and incorporate it into the text they are already writing.
  • Communal text rehearsal Children say out loud what they are about to write – others listen in, comment, offer support or give feedback.
  • Personal text rehearsal Children talk to themselves about what they are about to write down. This may include encoding individual words aloud. Other children might listen in, comment, offer support or give feedback.
  • Text checking Children tell or read back what theyโ€™ve written so far and others listen in, comment, offer support or give feedback.
  • Performance Children share their texts with each other as an act of celebration and publication.

We draw Children often like to translate their ideas visually. Drawing allows them to plan and express their thoughts before writing, and it supports their understanding of chronology and narrative sequencing. It also gives them something to talk about and otherwise โ€˜tellโ€™ prior to transcribing it to paper.

We write Here, children transcribe their ideas into the written form. This may involve mark-making, early letter formation, or structured sentences depending on their stage of development. They apply their phonics knowledge, through encoding, and begin to explore spelling, punctuation, and grammar in context.

We share Children continually share their compositions with others – reading or โ€˜tellingโ€™ aloud or discussing their writing with peers and adults. This stage fosters pride, purpose, and a sense of audience, and it encourages reflection and further development of their writing skills.

This recursive process supports young writers in building both the transcriptionally and compositional aspects of writing in a meaningful and developmentally appropriate way.

4. Ellen Counterโ€™s โ€˜Writing Houseโ€™

To teach writing effectively, we must encourage children to see writing as a process, while also teaching and modelling strategies that support its key stages: idea generation, planning, drafting, editing, and proofreading.

Whilst the writing process is recursive (we naturally move back and forth between stages), and although it can look different depending on what is being written and why, children need to understand that each stage of the process is distinct and requires a different kind of focus.

We could argue that this process is like building a house. Without time and teaching dedicated to each stage, the writing (like a house) could fall apart and not be fit for purpose. In the same way, our feedback will only be effective if we consider the stage children are at in the process and tailor our advice accordinglyโธ.

Using this model, we can extend the metaphor to guide what we focus on during writing time. It all depends on the stage. After all, you wouldnโ€™t insist on ordering paint colours before the walls have even been built. As the DfEโ€™s Writing Framework suggests, it makes little sense to focus on childrenโ€™s spelling inaccuracies when they are still working hard on getting their ideas down onto the paperโน.

Figure: A visual representation of the writing process to support shared understanding ยฉ HFL Education, used within ESSENTIALWRITING | HFL Education

The terms generate ideas, plan, draft, revise, re-read, evaluate, edit, proof-read, perform and share are all mentioned within the National Curriculum, but teacher training and writing schemes rarely equip teachers with how to explicitly teach these processes. 

For example, children are often told to proof-read or โ€˜checkโ€™ their writing without being taught how writers do this, within a clear framework of shared strategies to support themยนโฐ. 

Take the case of a Year 1 child who was thought to be falling behind in her writing because she wasnโ€™t punctuating her sentences. Interestingly, she: 

  • Could identify where a full-stop belonged when shown an unpunctuated sentence.ย 
  • Had age-appropriate knowledge of sentence structure. For instance, she could read her writing back, recognised where one idea ended, and understood that her reader would need a full-stop before the next idea began.ย 

So whatโ€™s happening here? 

The issue lies in the misconception and expectation that writing must be 100% accurate at the point of draftingยนยน. The child was only given one shot to get everything โ€˜rightโ€™, so the absence of punctuation is treated as failure. In reality, the problem is weโ€™ve overlooked how writing actually works. Like building a house, writing requires time for each stage: strategies for proof-reading need to be explicitly taught, and space for evaluating and reconceptualising is neededยนโฐ. The child wasnโ€™t failing โ€“ the approach was failing the child.

Conclusion and next steps

Planning a writing unit

In 2019, we were lucky enough to interview and observe some of the best performing writing teachers in England. We released our findings as a book in 2021. What was clear was how these teachers used the writing processes to plan their class writing units.

Teaching the writing processes is also a validated evidence-based practice, with a potential effect size of +1.28 (for context, anything over +0.4 is considered to be significantly effective). 

To find out more about the components of an effective writing unit, see our article.

Children also developing their own writing processes

As well as planning effective writing units, the exceptional writing teachers we observed gave their pupils time to develop their own writing process by way of personal writing projects. To find out more, see this publication. In teaching children the writing processes, we do more than guide them to craft great pieces, we hand them the tools to shape their voices, their stories, and, over time, their worlds.

By Ross Young & Ellen Counter

References

  1. How Writing Works: From the Invention of the Alphabet to the Rise of the Social Media by Dominic Wyse [LINK]
  2. โ€˜Teachersโ€™ orientations towards teaching writing and young writersโ€™ [LINK] and โ€˜Six discourses, four philosophies, one framework: A critical reading of the DfEโ€™s writing guidanceโ€™ [LINK]
  3. The science of teaching primary writing [LINK]
  4. Motivating writing teaching [LINK]
  5. The rhetorical situation [LINK]
  6. โ€˜Reading like a writerโ€™ [LINK] and โ€˜Reading in the writing classroomโ€™ [LINK]
  7. How to teaching writing [LINK]
  8. A guide to pupil-conferencing with 3-11 year olds: Powerful feedback & responsive teaching that changes writers [LINK]
  9. The DfEโ€™s Writing Framework [LINK]
  10. No more: โ€˜My pupils canโ€™t edit!โ€™ A whole-school approach to developing proof-readers [LINK]
  11. Debunking edu-myths: Writing errors form bad habits [LINK]